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As an A-Style tour it's very nice. These tours are less and less common these days and only seem to convert certain types of traffic.
A couple constructive criticisms:
Make the GET INSTANT ACCESS Button jump out more by being different color text.
Sort through some more pics and get a bustier chick in there and maybe a redhead if you got one. Cover all the bases in other words.
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