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I - Naturally Large Boobs: Nice animation and coloring on the bottom links. Girls Bios are always good to have too
Needs more links to the join page... (ask for the sale twice per page). Free sample videos is a kick ass sales tool. YOu could get more mileage out of it by putting on then index page "FREE XXX Sample Videos Inside!". tour1.html Cherry's tits are small
~. IMHO the domain name at the top right could be bigger. Definetly needs more links to the join page. ANother incomplete join page... how lame
. Nice color useage through out the site. COuld use some suggestive text and not just specs on what's in the site. Tell how the chicks love having hard cocks rammed between there tits and huge loads of warm cum shot on their chins.
J - Web Young: Nice bios with suggestive text on the index. Three links to the join page is good. Nice spread shot on the index page is good. MOre nice bios and clam shots on page2.html. And more links to the join page. Bio text could be highlighted a little better IMHO. Animating the Join NOW graphics would be better also. hmmm... 3rd page of bios... what about videos Live chat and all that good shit? The 4th page of bios and join buttons... and another incomplete join page. You need to let the surfer know what they are going to get inside. Mix it up some between bios, site info, and suggestive text.
K - Young Teen Nudes: Nice :"Get instant access now" animation is good. Text lower left should be highlighted better. The chicks don't look like teens. Nice hardcore shots on tour1.html. Nice overview of XXX Movies. Why is the first letter of every word capitalized? Nice screen shot of the chat interface on tour2.html. To much text... text is important but there could be another good hardcore pic on tour2.html. Un finished join page... the most important part.
L - Wild & Ready: This motherfucker is built to sell I wouldn't change a thing except... add a free embedded video. The email grabber on the join page rocks.
Regards,
SixNine
SoulCash.com