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F - Xtreme Dreams: Design looks good. Needs animated "TAKE TOUR" graphic to grab surfers attention. Too much smart blur on the babes on photos.html. Needs animate continue button or join button. IMHO Ask for the sale at least twice per page. Suggestive text needs work... "YOU SHOOT" on movies.html, what the heck does that mean and why is it taking up the best real estate on the page? "I'M NOT THAT INNOCENT YOU KNOW!" hmmm... sounds lame. Change that text to... "You might think I'm innocent but... I really crave hard cocks shoved up my ass!"

~. Could use better coloring to highlight the text. I like the little cuttout at the bottom with sales text sitting on the background. On bonus.html the fonts could be biggter... good coloring though. Not enough links to the join page throughout the whole tour. In most cases the point of a tour is to get eyeballs in front of the join page. WTF... bonus.html join link loops to bonus.html. Why bother entering an unfinished design in this contest? If I knew it was half assed I wouldn't have taken the time to rate it.
G - Teen Stop: Nice color usage. There's a little horizontal scroll at 800X600 and the continue button is below the fold. What the heck does "Independent site parts updates!" mean?. I read the rest of the text and it reads as if the designer does not speak English as a primary language... no worries, just make sure your clients proof their text before you go live.

Why does tour1.html pop in a new window? THe animated continue button is good. a highlighted join now! button would have been better. SOme of the babes don't look like teens. Nice animation on tour2.html... it should have a phat blind Click Here to Watch graphic right in the middle. Incomplete join form... why did half of you not complete the join form it's the most important page inthe tour?
H - Wood Nymph & Holly Potter: No domain/branding on the main page. At 800X600 the bottom link is below the fold (very bad). The text at the top of the main page is some of the most valuable space on the page and you wasted it with silly text.I stay away from purposely mispelling words "Halp" (I'm assuming you did that on purpose). Doesn't look like you preloaded the mouseover graphics (They take too long to load). Holly Potter is kind of fugly. YOu could have at least shown some nipple on the index page. Nice animated Instant Access graphic. The preview button is a little strange. It's not clear that the button goes to the next page in the preview. This tour is kind of a mind fuck with out a clear path to the join page. Join page looks good but... how much does access cost? WOuld you click on a join form button without knowing how much access costs?
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