Originally Posted by AngelDollarsAndy

Oh for... *sigh*

That's it!(Consider using an exclamation to emphasize your point here) I'm gonna beat the shit out of Shay live so that you can't use her for content because she will be bruised.(Consider modifying-possible runon sentence) Actually,(Start of new sentence- capitalize always) you might discover a new fetish (bruised bitches) and make bank(Avoid use of contemporary slang if possible-ie "..make significant returns on your investment" ). So looks like it's a standoff right now.

4/10

This one was even worse than your first entry sonofsam (Should be Sonofsam- propoer name) . Are you using the pot?