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Originally Posted by sonofsam
thats it... i'm gonna beat the shit out of shaylive... so that you can't use her for content because she will be bruised....  actually.. you might discover a new fetish (bruised bitches) and make bank... so looks like its a standoff right now... DUM DUM DUMMMM |
Oh for... *sigh*
That
's it!(
Consider using an exclamation to emphasize your point here) I
'm gonna beat the shit out of
Shay live so that you can't use her for content because she will be bruised.(
Consider modifying-possible runon sentence)
Actually,(
Start of new sentence- capitalize always) you might discover a new fetish (bruised bitches) and make bank(
Avoid use of contemporary slang if possible-ie "..make significant returns on your investment" ).
So looks like it
's a standoff right now.
4/10
This one was even worse than your first entry sonofsam (Should be
Sonofsam- propoer name) . Are you using the pot?