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I think the site looks fantastic!....
... but you asked for comments....
First off.... it loads QUICK!.... cool.
The 3rd girl on the left, looks wonderful! She's happy & more important..... Belivable! ....nice work.
What i would change, (IMHO) is the pale girl on the left... She looks sweet, but she seems to have a "redness rash" around her buttocks, And that butt is a HUGE eye catcher, I'd guess it's the largest graphic on the site??. I'd take that butt.... & color it in a bit....
What i do like about the girl....... Is that she is indeed "pale"...
It may not have caught on yet... But that's another niche in it's self. Very well done... Just fix the butt.
About the two girls on the left...
Nice!.... but they need to be in a lip lock. WHY? ... Because every dude on earth loves that shit .... but what dudes don't like is.....
The word lesbian. ... (they do... but it's not a sign up maker)
I know you didn't use that word... but the "pic" implies it.
They (the surfer) wants to be in the middle of that shit. Let him know he can be! Let the surfer know that the two girls are kissing because there absolutely "lost" without his dick. Because the girls are, (many things), alone, bi, homeless, lost, confused, They need a dick more than anything!
AND LAST... But not least ... by any means!...
IS you have way to many recip links, on a "good sell page" like you have
This is (IMHO) a MAJOR boo boo!
YES... you have to trade traffic and what not.... But don't fuck yourself either......... My god man! You have that great site... and then a zillion links away from it!.... ARE you MAD man!
Sharing is cool.... if ya get it back..... are ya?... 12 or so leaks?
My other last thing is this....
I didn't notice if you had a counter or not, but if you do?.... Don't put it at the bottom of your page......
Lord knows Why???? ... but surfers have a thing about "clicking" the VERY bottom link...... might as well be yours.
Put the counter anywhere but the "last link".
OK....... I'm sorry if i rambled on,.... and please cuse my spelling. I think you have a money maker site.... and i'm jelious...
So... fuck ya!
Shrek
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