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Xster · 05-02-2005, 07:57 PM

OK I EDITED IT AND ADDED "THE BAG" INSTEAD OF THE WIRE. THANKS EVERYONE!

INT. DOYLE?S CAR
Doyle slides in and sets his gun on the passenger seat. He sticks a key in the ignition and looks into the rear view mirror. Suddenly sees --

MICKEY stares back at him in the reflection.

DOYLE reaches for his gun. In the blink of an eye, Mickey covers Doyle?s head with a clear garbage bag and tightens it.

Doyle struggles and tries to free himself. Mickey pulls back harder. The plastic pops in and out over Doyle?s mouth with every last breath. Mickey brings his head up against Doyle?s ear, teeth gritted.

MICKEY
(tightens grip)
Give Elvis my best.

Mickey relaxes himself slightly and waits for Doyle to die.

Doyle rams his finger into the plastic over his mouth and pokes a small hole.
He breaths in!

MICKEY
Tricky fucker.

Mickey leans over the front seat, still a tight hold of Doyle and grabs his gun. Doyle weak now, tries to grab onto Mickey. Mickey pushes Doyle's hand away like a rag doll. He sits back with the gun and lets go of the bag.

Doyle rips it off and sucks in air like he?s been underwater for the last five minutes.

MICKEY
Enjoy that breath. It's your last.

Mickey aims the gun at the back of Doyle?s head and pulls the trigger. Blood splatters everywhere on the windshield.

05-02-2005, 07:57 PM
Xster Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Boston Posts: 577	OK I EDITED IT AND ADDED "THE BAG" INSTEAD OF THE WIRE. THANKS EVERYONE! INT. DOYLE?S CAR Doyle slides in and sets his gun on the passenger seat. He sticks a key in the ignition and looks into the rear view mirror. Suddenly sees -- MICKEY stares back at him in the reflection. DOYLE reaches for his gun. In the blink of an eye, Mickey covers Doyle?s head with a clear garbage bag and tightens it. Doyle struggles and tries to free himself. Mickey pulls back harder. The plastic pops in and out over Doyle?s mouth with every last breath. Mickey brings his head up against Doyle?s ear, teeth gritted. MICKEY (tightens grip) Give Elvis my best. Mickey relaxes himself slightly and waits for Doyle to die. Doyle rams his finger into the plastic over his mouth and pokes a small hole. He breaths in! MICKEY Tricky fucker. Mickey leans over the front seat, still a tight hold of Doyle and grabs his gun. Doyle weak now, tries to grab onto Mickey. Mickey pushes Doyle's hand away like a rag doll. He sits back with the gun and lets go of the bag. Doyle rips it off and sucks in air like he?s been underwater for the last five minutes. MICKEY Enjoy that breath. It's your last. Mickey aims the gun at the back of Doyle?s head and pulls the trigger. Blood splatters everywhere on the windshield. Last edited by Xster; 05-02-2005 at 07:58 PM..