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Old 05-01-2005, 07:11 PM  
Xster
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Irish Mob Initiation - Screenplay critiques!

I posted a link to this PDF file in another thread but it was off topic.

I'm meeting with an associate of MGM to discuss finance and budget for my original screenplay "Townies" next week. The script is about a bank robber/gangster named Mickey Callaghan who lives in Charlestown Boston amongst the Irish mafia.

In the screenplay there is a never before discussed or shown visually Irish Mob initiation. This scene happens around page 30 of the "full" 110 page script. If anyone would like to take a look and comment on it, I'd appreciate it! The dialogue needs a little choppin' up but other than that its a Final draft.
Slainte!

TOWNIES - IRISH MOB INITIATION - 8 PAGES
http://www.towniesmovie.com/townies.pdf
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