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well... hmm. Ok. Take this all as constructive criticism.
Try using actual peach colors in your design. Get rid of the peach tree background or recolor it so it matches a peach color scheme. Even run a cartooning effect on it. You want your design to POP for a site with girls like this. make that part smaller too, it's too tall and wasting valuable design space.
Just throwing a bunch of cut outs in the middle of the page is not going to cut it. Come up with a design scheme. Use background gradients to fill it out. use blending and blurs between each girl, even overlap them some. Try to keep them all in one row and not all over the place with big dead spots everywhere.
All poses should be where the girl is looking at the surfer. The white top girl and the fingering girl aren't even looking at anyone and look bored. You're doing the right thing with the ass shots though. Always good to have the girl looking back at the surfer like that in a "come get it big boy" look.
The instant access area looks good.
Overall the whole design needs to be tighter and more closely knit. Too much dead space with just random cut out girls thrown in there like it's a 1996 era AVS.
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