Originally Posted by enter »

Special allowance for her father's sick in Nov, 04;

Special allowance for her fathers illness in Nov, 04;

Prepayment of USD 1000 for each follow month;

Prepayment of USD 1000 for each of the following months;

Thank for you attention!

Thank you for your attention!


Also, your letter says Mr. Tom Chan but then later it says for HER fathers sickness?

There's probably more mistakes and a better way to word the whole thing but I'm not that motivated. Good luck.