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Hello, and welcome. I took a look at sexcityhardcore.com and here is my opinion...
I really like the main page. Nice pictures and captions and good fonts. In fact the whole site seems fairly tight picture wise.
I also like the idea of the erotic story but it didn't seem to fit in and was really weak. It definately needs to be tied to something or dropped. There isn't anything else on that page that mentions stories or why it's there. Personally I think more sites need more stories so I would work on tieing it in more.
Tour seemed good as did everything else.
Good luck.
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