The entrance page isn't bad at all. you might want to make the shape take up more to the left and right of it and place it down some on the page.
Instead of having mad free pictures, why not find the hottest girls, extract them and put them inside your shape. and link maybe 2 or 3 pictures each on a page instead of 16 at once.
At the top of the second page the girl you extracted on the banner looks a bit squished when she got scaled down. and maybe add some element like a line of frame around that page to bring it all together.
These are my late night ramblings. good luck making sense.
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