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I thought it was pretty good. The only part that had me wonder is why the two lookout guys started doing cartwheels and were really acting like clowns even when they were killing the guy. to me it seemed like that was too much of an effort to make them look crazy, but maybe it fits in somewhere down the road.
good luck with the project. I shot a couple of short films a while back. It's a lot of work but pretty cool to see your ideas alive on screen.
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