11-21-2004, 08:10 PM
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Too lazy to set a custom title
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Join Date: Jan 2001
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Originally posted by BitterPen
I like it, but there are a few things that I feel could be made better. I'm not a designer, by any means of the word, but the header lacks originality. Is this going to replace your current site, www.AcidFlyers.com, or is this for something else? Also, since I'm a word freak, I have to mention that this phrase takes something away from your "promise" to the consumer:
"We promise to deliver the best product at a timely manner. Although we cannot control equipment malfunctions we try everything in our power to get your job done quick and right."
Don't mention that you have equipment malfunctions. It makes it sound as though you have old equipment, and they should worry that this could happen to them.
Those are just a couple of suggestions.  
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equipement malfonctions happens all the time in printing ...
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Originally Posted by rayadp05
I rebooted, deleted temp files, history, cookies and everything...still cannot view the news clip. All I see is that fucking gay ass music video from "Rick Roll". Anyone else have a different link to the news clip?
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