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OK,
firstly, all your images are broken in Netscape (they show up in IE fine, but won't show up in some versions of AOL (you have spaces in your image file names)). Even though AOLers are a pain in the ass, they are buyers...this is why I keep my gallery designs fairly simple...
Your ad text is quite frankly boring...it doe nothing to compell me to click...you have a good start with the series pics, but why not a little text under each thumb telling the story? Build some excitement...if I do click on your text link, the tour I see doesn't match your content, yet your text would imply that I should see the rest of this series at Wasteland...Wasteland has been around for awhile, so there may be a bit of overexposure...You also promise full penetration bondage sex, which is a false claim...that's considerd obscenity (especially in Canada). So, anyone signing up for your sponsor looking for that, won't see it and won't stay a customer for long.
As a surfer, I want to know what your sponsor offers that I can't see for free where I just came from...get me excited, tell me about all the video and love cams, tell me about streaming bondage videos, talk dirty to me...learn the lingo of people that are seriously into bondage.
Wasteland, the site, is a very strong site for people that are really into the bondage scene and know their shit and can spot a phony a mile away.
Keep the background color of your gallery black to match the site you're sending the surfers to...take note of the sponsor tour...they brag about "as seen on..." add that shit to your gallery page...tell them how popular this site is for bondage purists...know your sponosr...use tidbits from their tour to sell them...you want the surfer to get the impression that site is yours and you're not merely an advertiser for the site trying to make a few bucks off them...sell the fantasy...
hey, is that Dave Atell in those pics? ;))) kidding
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