08-25-2004, 10:44 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Germany
Posts: 1,884
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Originally posted by RedShoe
I like the layout. It's simple and easy to read. The only thing I would change is the "me, me, me" link at the top.
Move that to the bottom of the group. Sell them first.
The design reminds me of single girl amateur sites from a few years ago. A large black and white was the standard. If that was the look then you nailed it.
I like those designs. They were nice.
This design (as I look at it more and more...) seems bottom heavy. Like the top is very open... lot's of room up there, and towards the bottom right seems crowded in comparison. Perhaps push some things into the upper right area above the title so you have some nice eye candy up there as well.
Also.. after looking at it again, the words, "Me", and "my" seem to jump out at 'me' a lot. Might need to expand that vocabulary just a tad so the site doesn't appear to be too self-serving.
As-in: "Look at me, here's me, here's my tits, here's stuff I like, here's stuff I want, here's me in my underwear, here's me, me, me,.."
I think you need to make your site about the surfer. I think all single girl sites need to cater MORE to the needs of the surfer and not themselves.. 'How may I please YOU?" "What do YOU like".. " I want YOU".. not so much.. "look at ME"
Take no offense to this. I'm being in a very usually helpful mood right now. So all of this is meant with all due respect.
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Thanks ALOT!!!! I appreciate your comments and I will discuss them with my partner on the site.
BIG KISS!!!!!
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