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Joe Foxx,
I guess the 404 problem was fixed, Im able to see the gallery now. Nice layout--good organization pushing the user to look at the marketing message near the center of the page. Here's some suggestions:
Focus on one sponsor -- you have BOB and ARS' ebony on ivory on your gallery... unify your message to focus on the offerings of 1 sponsor. By concentrating on one sponsor you can list out, in graphic and descriptive terms, WHY the user should click and buy.
Use "secret sauce" language like -- Never before seen movies of tender young White Girls getting their assholes ripped open by huge black dicks." or something like that...
As Richard Prior said "GET RAW!"
A lot of the times, when I am designing a gallery I write out my ideas of what the sponsor site has and write down descriptive words. I then narrow and shorten the list until I have Short Choppy and Direct text. I then format this to fit the gallery.
Another idea is to tell a quick story about the girl, make up bullshit bio info, and end with a quick but nasty description of what she does at the site. Also, in the messaging area surrounded by the thumbs, you may want to use a provocative picture of the girls face over Text title like "I love Black Dick" to make it personalized.
Just suggestions, let me know how it goes.
Pimplink
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