SixNine,
First of all, let me congratulate you. You obviously know what you're doing. The picture selection is great. The placement of the banner with surrounding text is superb.
Here's just my opinions re possible improvements:
Great series but don't show the penetration shots...the point is to get the surfer horny for the girl, showing her taking pole kinda defeats the purpose. Pics of kissing or intense "fuck me" looks is good.
The choice of the flashing gif showing oral is great since it fits the theme of the gallery. Text needs to be stronger -- give a little bio of the chick "slutty college girl..." "innocent blonde...etc"
Describe the value add of the site --what do you offer? Describe the features in short but very graphic sentences.
Lose the "outrageous" sentence... the word "outrageous" is vague... Show us what's so outrageous? Does she lick cum off the floor? Tossing salad,etc?
Overall a kick ass gallery since it has on point theme, has that "looking in your eye" sexiness to it, also, except for the penetration shots, very very teasing.
Let us know how the conversions rack up should you modify the gallery.
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