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Fetish Temptress,
Looks good but definitely needs fine tuning.
Gallery 1: Your text describes what the user can already see--the gallery... get him/her excited about THE SITE, not the gallery. My suggestion, start out with a sentence listing what you have --squirters, big breasts, pregnancy, whatever... Next text block, describe what other pictures have... cock sucking, hard fucking, tit squirting... GET RAW, GET NASTY in your text. REmember you're selling your WHOLE library of pics not just this gallery. 3rd block of text Zero in on the sale -- CLick Here to Join Today.
One way to Filter out nonserious surfers is to spell out that the service is NOT free--spell out the price, e.g. Only $2.95 etc
Let us know how it goes,
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