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Itchy,
Cool gallery. I like the layout. You may want to alter the central graphic though. Since we already have softcore surrounding it, you may want to have a "cluster" of photos with differing degrees of rawness--start of with nude shots of differing types of girls the site offers. Show not just Goth girls but raver chicks, etc. Then have 1 or 2 graphics showing oral or hard sex. Just enough to give the surfer the idea that there is FUCKIN in that website not just another iteration of softcore poses.
As for your text, be DRAMATIC...that's the whole idea of Goth--to be in your face, so be in your face with the text. What do these goth/raver chicks do? Don't just list your content--you already did that with your graphic, describe what do they do? what else do you have? live feeds? which kind, what's in it? interactive chat?
Once again, should you decide to use these suggestions, please post a report on the changes to your conversions.
Best,
Pimplink
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