Ed,
The pictures look good but sometimes "series" pics get and keep the surfer's attention better.
Use larger text, don't underline everything--it takes away from the general impact of your sales pitch. Since there are a lot of voyeur stuff out there already, DESCRIBE to the surfer what the value add of your site is. End the pitch portion with the word FREE -- but qualify it eg. "100% Free!" Also, people get off on the phrase "No Credit Card Required"
Also, compose the text the following way--
Head Teaser to get the surfer's attention
e.g. "Housewife BlowJobs" "Next Door Teen Nudity" or something like that ... make it DRAMATIC. Use the body text to DESCRIBE not just say what you have... end the text with a call to action--the surfer is clearly instructed that they must DO something.
If you choose to follow these changes please report back with the effects on your conversion.
Best,
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