Squishy,
Here's my notes on your galleries
Gallery 1 -- came up as Page not found
Gallery 2 -- Good move on the banner and text near the center and the 3 larger pics on the top. However, the background probably takes away from the impact. My suggestion is to lose the background graphic, embed the banner and text into an HTML color box and use a differing color for the background for the rest of the page. Use bold for the lower text.
Let me know how this affects your ratio, should you take this advise.
Gallery 3: Good Strategy of splitting up the sales portions of the webpage into two polar sections [top and bottom]. However, the surfer basically gets to feast on the center and can be done with the gallery. Let's break this up by putting an odd shaped [125 X 125?] banner with text on top and below the banner. Best "middle layout" approach will probably be to use 1 graphic of the girl, and 4 clusters of text spelling out the following:
1) What will users see at the pay site?
2) How will they see it? [describe features]
3) How will they pay [focus on No Credit Card needed, etc if the site supports online check etc]
4) What do they need to do to get to the content?
Another tip--testimonials work pretty good [not as good for porn sites as for penis/medical products]
More reviews to follow
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