I just signed up for your program, and to do my part in helping you out with your english, here ya go.
url:
http://www.coalixxxion.com/cash/index.php
current text: Our new company just started; (So now is chance to make great Business, became our partners);
corrected text: Our new company just started; (So now is your chance to create a great business opportunity and become one of our partners)
Hope that helps!