That one has a better layout than the first, except that you have to scroll a lot to see the whole gallery. Try to keep the scrolling to a minimum so the surfer sees your ad as soon as the page loads.
Also, I would get rid of those 2 odd-sized banners and create my own graphic to put where your text is now, and move the text to the left, where the HOT BLACK SLUTS button is now. That way they read your text and then get a nice big image to click on if they're interested.
Last, I would make the text more exciting to the surfer by telling him how this black chick and her friends all want his cock in their brown pussies, etc. Move all that "12 sites for one price" crap to the bottom since it's not exactly jerk-off material, and make sure all the text on the page is linked to your sponsor.
I'm by no means a gallery expert, those are just a few suggestions that I think would increase your chances of making a sale.
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