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Originally posted by FlyingIguana
i highly doubt 95% don't know what it is.
i think what you wrote was a bit dry. you could have made it like a short sex story and got your point across in a much better way. a way in which the surfer gets a hard on just reading it.
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There's a lot of things I could've changed or tried.. But I had faith in eroswebmaster's gallery. I did minor changes because I knew it was good.