you have teen girls on the site! thats a bonus. your tour isnt too cramped with bullshit and the days of 42nd street type porn sites are over. so you did well with that concept.
the page loaded quickly (then again i am on a ridiculously high speed connection right now). i doubt it would load too much slower on a cable or dsl connection.
the overall concept is really good. and as i said, there are TEENS on the site.