From a surfer POV, if I see Jenna.com I wanna see Jenna. And in adult there's only one Jenna, you can name 10 million girls "Jenna" (let me say the name "Jenna 2" is absolutely stupid IMHO. What's next? Jenna 3 The Revenge, Jenna 4 attack of the bimbos?) but surfers know one and only one: Jenna Jameson. Isn't it possible to get some Jenna content you can put in the tour?
Another thing would be to see your former tour to compare. All in all, the tour looks decent, maybe a slight bit of compression. But it lacks of marketing slogans, or even why the domain name is Jenna.com but you don't have Jenna in the tour.
Anyway, hope that helps, if you need anything feel free to contact me and I'll help you in what I can
