Things are lookin alright. (other than that god awful background color), but that's just my opinion
I usually spread my entry tour over a couple of pages. Search engine traffic is the most vital traffic you need for an avs site. Get listed at dmoz, altavista, et al. Others will say you can do well with avs traffic coming from tgp or free sites, but I would gladly take 100 se hits over 1000 tgp hits any day. Also, I am not familiar with Freenet pass, but in your sales pitch you might mention that a pass to your site also gives them access to all of Freenet's sites. Good luck with it.