Adammairxxx -
You are trying to help me so I would be glad to give you some advice. The gallery looks busy and confusing to me (from a surfers point of view) It's a classic in and out gallery, meaning a surfer will see it - scan the pics - and split. There is no association between the pics and the ads. It's obvious to the surfer what he needs to avoid. If I ever get FP fixed I could tweak it out a bit for you. Here is an example of one of my galleries....
http://www.quicknclean.com/lightspeed/
I took the templates lightspeed gives you and made it my own. There text was good, it just needed to be more focused. This is clean enough to get listed anywhere (maybe a couple guys will not like the text under the thumbs but doubtful) There is only 2 sponsor links so it is clean as shit but the surfer can't help but read what you have to say about the sponsor.