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Old 05-03-2004, 08:18 AM  
sltr
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Quote:
Originally posted by HighOnAcid
I don't get it. There was no climatic ending. It can't be a story without some sort of climatic ending.

Even if you have to sprinkle it with fiction in order to spice it up, do it. It was a good story and captured my attention and then it just ended. It was like getting head from your girlfriend and right when you're about to cum she gets up and walks out.

You should get some sort of defense glass to stand behind. I've hard of some crazy shit going on at gas stations.
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