1. Creative Writing means it still has to make sense.
2. Watch your tenses. Be consistant.
"The next thing I know I was in the middle" should be "the next thing I KNEW I was in the middle"
3. Kidnapped/cow napped would make more sense as "rustled", since that is how cowboys stole cows from each other in the Wild West.
4. The narrator can not be a "steer" and a "sorceress" at the same time. Steers are male.
5. Identify your setting better. You say you're walking home from school, implying an urban or semi-urban setting, when all of a sudden you're in the woods being attacked by a free-ranging cow.
6. Identify yourself up front. Name? Country? Race? etc.
Could be a tight story. Kinda weird so far, but I like weird.
