Hi Heat
A couple of things that struck me!!
http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/
you hva e no exit link on the site!! there has to be a clear exit link hopefully going to something mainstream that you can profit from aswell!!
http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/main.htm
Try and add a bit more text in to set the illusion into the surfers mind!
http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/g...hloe-jones.htm
Takes ages to load and I'm using a satellite connection!! must surfers aare still using dial - up!!
All you really need is text, 2 banners and the pics!! you should try and use 10 pics per page!! remember you you do not what them to be able to jack off at your site!! It's supposed to be a teaser with the view of getting them hot and horny to the point they'll whip out the cc and sign up wuth your sponsor!!
It also looks like you have used the graphics from FHG!!!
http://chloe-jones.lovelyjenna.net/g...hloe-jones.htm
Have a link tellign them this is the end of this site and have it link to a hub where you have other niches on etc etc!!!