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Old 03-22-2004, 02:46 PM  
jmarzlak
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Join Date: Jan 2004
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Quote:
Originally posted by Babagirls
too much text in the middle (write a sentence, not a life story.)

get other teaser pics-lookin a girl by the pool in the bikini doesnt make me wanna see more. you can see that on a beach.


also, change "INSTANT ACCESS" to something more attractive, like "SEE HER NAKED NOW!" or something.

"INSTANT ACCESS" to surfers mean "click her to pay me"

ok makes thanks
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