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Originally posted by Amputate Your Head
jesus....
seriously, what is your problem? do you enjoy riding my ass like this? do you literally have nothing better to do with your fucking time? or do you just get an erection out of it?
this is some seriously non-productive shit, for BOTH of us.
step away from the fucking computer and go get a goddamned life. Leave me the fuck out of your soap operas.
you're not a fucking pimp, you're not being "cool", you're not The Fonz, and the world does not spin around the axis of your head.
take a break from chatting up your buddies in your little cyber drama world and go take a fucking walk and get some air or something.
fuck...
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My thesis:
AMP likes this shotgun prose. Short, sharp sentences. A little artful, a little sophisticated.
A little "axis of your head", a little "gonna burn you down with my cigarette".
Sure - it's not Tolstoy, it's not even Hemingway. But it works in this context. And when Aaron potatoes-and-gravy answer comes, we all see the difference.