your text says "Thats right..... ONLY $10 You pay $10 and thats it! There are no hidden costs no extra chages Just quality pornfor ONE MONTH!"
you should change two things:
"Thats right..... ONLY $10 You pay $10 and
that's it! There are no hidden costs no extra
charges Just quality pornfor ONE MONTH!"
but english is not my tongue language - better ask a native speaker first
else i think thats one nice gallery - if you don't mind, submit it to hornysheep.com - i need galleries badly there (building it up again right now)