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Old 02-17-2004, 04:38 PM  
PrivateIvy
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Originally posted by m00d
PrivateIvy
You should correct some of your punctuation errors on the site. I looked at only a couple of pages and this jumped out at me :

http://www.heatherhamptons.com/about.html

turnoff's
turnon's

those shouldn't have apostrophes.
There are probably more, I only looked at 2 pages.
I didn't design that page.....Heather had an existing site before I took her on and I've been integrating with a new tour , redoing her members area , and will get to the smaller trafficed pages like that one later. My focus was redoing her tour, promotion , and redoing the members area to load content faster.

But then again...I don't have to explain to you on each of my clients sites what I am or am not doing right?

Now , if you'd like to critique a site, Pick one I started from scratch
www.PrivateIvy.com www.FetishIvy.com www.femmeXotique.com I'm sure I don't have to list them all.....


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