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Old 11-13-2003, 01:41 PM  
ad-lib
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Quote:

Yo I saw J Zee on MTV blowin up a car tryin' to be a real G
So I wanna know why does the industry
Consistently continue their delivery ficticiously
With vicious imagery and nothin' lyrically
We're conditioned with the visions without the dictionary
So the pictures sweet coz its the Quality Street type
Thank you very very very much and more hype
More bites, more court fights before even more hype
It's not right, just drop tight

and so on...........
Wow, you're a basic dictionary textcee. Big fucking deal.

For one, see if you can spit that in audio. You will have no flow. For two, if you're going to enter the pitiful level of a "textcee", at least use wordplay/punchlines/and metaphors. At least that shows some creativity/talent as a writer.

Otherwise you're garbage. Even your end "multi syllable" rhyming is stretched. "Street hype" "More Hype" "More Hype" "Drop tight".
Fucking overused, redundant filler text. Go home urchant.
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