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Old 09-09-2003, 12:12 PM  
kid crackle
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Originally posted by C_U_Next_Tuesday

point out reasons for improvment please..
1. - the lines are horribly cut-out and obviously not done via illustrating software or on a seperate layer
2.- the shading/highlighting does not fit the style and is completely off, there are lights coming from every direction
3.- the left tit is much larger than the right
4.- the angle of the board is completely off, and the type looks pretty bad
5.- the hair looks like one stiff piece and lacks any type of movement
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