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Originally Posted by Applebite Media
Someone called the original one of this creepy. Girl daydreaming on a bed.. rough animation... I get it. Appreciate the advice....
Made some changes, added a short story and smoothed out the animation.
Still creepy? Maybe depressing as hell... (sound board... made a story from some of it LOL) But being soundboard audio, it's hard to get good voice expression....
So anyway... thoughts.....
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Thanks for posting your project! As a professional, here's my thoughts:
Not bad at all for a layperson. The subject is outfitted in an appealing and suggestive stylized outfit. I found myself glancing downward/upskirt a few times to see how revealing she was. That's a good sign for a scene.
The primary thing that makes this not work is the thing you already know about
: the facial animations don't sync to the voice. That's a non-starter and it draws all the focus away. Once you get mocap for lip sync and facial expression, the same scene would be 50x better!
The voice work is superb! The lighting and shading are well done. I like the texture map for the skin and particularly the face, though there's probably better skin shaders out there (so B+ at least on that part).
The map is good and well textured too, and the breast motion looks good (B grade from me, which is still pretty good).
I wouldn't lose faith. You've got some ways to go, but as you've said repeatedly, you only started in January!
Please post an update when you fix the facial animation!