Originally Posted by NALEM

Mark the current video is absolutely dry. Does "A typical day in the life of a girl from Quebec" have potential. Absolutely!

This models typical day is not spent mowing the lawn ... all day.

Mix up the scenery/backgrounds. Follow her around. She wakes up in the morning, so start off in the bedroom or bathroom where she is fixing her hair and putting on makeup. Film her making tea, coffee or drinking juice. Getting into her auto, bus, or bike. Running errands. Stopping by the local pastry shop or coffee house. Focus in on her writing up something on the computer for her blog, or V-blogging. Buying food at the local market. If she is a cam model, show her checking into the studio, setting up with wardrobe, makeup, lights, etc.
She has friends? Show her getting together with them, at their home, a bar, restaurant, school, whatever. At some point, its the end of the day. She has to go home. At night, at the end of the video, she says goodnight, waves to the camera, gets into her car, or closes the door to her home.

PS. Just read your comment to Shap. Didnt know this was not yours. In this case, you could do these for your own models, as a interest piece.