That was pretty good. Kudos!
Couple of things....
Lose weight, or if you ever make it famous you will never live to spend your earnings.
Learn how to bitch slap, and beat a woman properly. Twisting nipples, and brushing a pussy through tacky crotchless panties and eating takeout on the back of a half nekkid woman is ghey.
Lose the masks. Why are you wearing them? What's the mystery, the secret?
Pretty good video though. You are the Sobes of the rap world, or whatever genre you are trying to cater too.