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Originally Posted by WolfDaddyStudios
Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to elaborate and offer critique. I completely agree about the camera angle being off and cropping his head looking amateur. I don't believe in making excuses, truth is I overlooked something critical and didn't catch it until post production. The camera's sticks got bumped just enough to fuck up the shot. It was my first porn shoot and truth be told I was nervous and a little overwhelmed. Lesson learned though.
Mounting the camera in a corner and up high is a great idea which solves the issue of camera obstruction. I've learned something and I'm very grateful for that.
Thank You so much.
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the other thing is the angle of the examine chair was off. that's is an entirely 'amateur' lens angle. pros tend to shoot eye level unless motivated by story concerns. amateurs tend to just stand there and shoot down, depending on their height. see pros tend do set their shots up for movement. I'll shoot this then I'll shoot this and edit the story along with the photography so there is a flow that flows character movements and story lines.
there is no real story or character development in porn. trying to create story with camera angles is a non starter. now were you to add 'tension' in the dialog before the sex stuff then you would need to work the lens to really turn up the tension....
example: my husband doesn't have sex with me anymore... 'the listener will pay attention' so you tease the 'admission with an insert close, up skirt shot with the guy in the back ground trying to see while he considers the ramifications of 'my husband doesn't have sex with me anymore' but it would even better to come up with tantalizing dialog that is a bit hostile and strange, to grab the interest of the listener.
my husband told me my pussy is ugly and he won't fuck me unless -----. then the dialog can really twist and story tell with the selected shots to push the agenda.. see?
otherwise just sick the camera up in the corner 'fly on the wall' style and let the viewers watch with out distracting camera work that adds nothing to the situation, other than close ups etc..