Ya know what, I wouldnt really change it, I like it its raw its amateurish, I bet it will do real good, only way to really tell is to send around 1k worth of traffic to it for about a week, look at ya logs to see where you are losing your surfer at, and just tweak it like that. I really do think this is good, One thing I may change is not to make the tour so long, maybe ONE tour page, But IMO I think one page sites are da bomb
Good luck
TOM