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Originally posted by lorsha
My hubby just redesigned our main page, and tour. We like to change it a couple of times a year. Any comments/constructive criticism is appreciated!
http://www.lorshasworld.com/main.htm
Lorsha
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Looks ok to me but here are a few things I would change.
1) limit your tour to 2 or 3 pages max.
2) change the 6 pics you have at the bottom so each page of your tour looks different. and link the pics to a larger image.
3) people love examples... promote the mpg sample more and make it stand out...maybe have a few more samples...teasers... give me a reason to want to join.
4) You have alot of text and I think thats why you went with 5 tour pages but I think you should re word what you are trying to say. Make it point form.. you were starting to loose me with all the reading. If you make it point form, you can still relay the same info and cut your tour down to 2 or 3 pages.
Just my
