please ignore that comment/guy, meta keyword tag has not been relevant in seo for years. and 62% general keywords..... you use your keyword 4 times over the page thats fine (there is no exact metric for this) (you use 'femdom a lot on the page, mainly the sidebar, i guess he means that with 62%, this is no issue for this page though since your not trying to rank on femdom)
First link: Title starts with keyword, this is good.
Url is also good
you have a double h1, (1 has an image:
http://www.femdomdestiny.com/wp-cont...dom-logo-1.png, you should remove the h1 there)
(you have the double h1 on every page)
Is the text unique? (hand written or copied from a other site?)
+ make sure your internal link structure is well done (this will help a lot)
link2.
Ideally you want more text on this page, a 'sweetspot' is usually around 300 words (again, no exact number) the 150 on this page is on the low side though
General issue:
Your non www does not redirect to www. Its not really an seo issue since you use canonical, but still recommended to fix this