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Trying to make a conscious effort in keeping them short and sweet and trying to HOOK the surfer, but there are some cases where I feel the need to lay out the entire storyline in order for the surfer to catch on..
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I have had this problem. It is tough, especially on complex scenes.... ( not the fucking, but the story line)
Sometimes I just try to put a little in, and then use text to try and explain what is going on.