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Sorry to LOL at your Join page mate but OMG LOL.
First:
Get rid of the black. White background. Too dark, not easy to read, off-putting, yuck.
Also, you are struggling over the wording? Dude, go to a few Join pages from established companies/websites to get some 'inspiration'. Use words they use in much the same way. THEY have tested it and it works. Will it work for you tho? Only testing will tell but don't try to re-invent the wheel here.
Also, what Relentless said.
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