man, i am very nice guy, but this is really hardcore
you have big background, on that big backgroung is big black square, half of the square is filled with big pink text, half of the rest are pics, the rest is blank space. you really need to hire designer
i bet nobody will buy this these days. look around in your niche, its another level. it really reminds me when i started with html, all that things, but at the end it was just funny. i see you are on wordpress, you can find really nice free tepmplates you can use, and there you go
have luck and congrats on the launch!
