I replied to your thread on the other forum section. Let me know if you want us to do a sample.
I only looked over it, but here's a suggestion I'd go for:
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The truth is that kids react to situations almost always by taking cues from how adults or parents are acting. If you look worried, upset or hiding something, they will most likely be anxious and afraid.
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Children almost always react to situations by taking cues from their parents or other adults around them. If you look worried, upset or as if you're hiding something, chances are they will become anxious and afraid as a result.