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Originally Posted by Jel
Shit tour page? Tell me how to make it better n
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It's hard to know where to start, the mistakes are so basic.
1) Don't use images of text. Google cannot read images. Use actual text. This can be styled using Google Web fonts.
www.google.com/webfonts
2) Don't send people straight to a payment page on JOIN. Use a prepayment page with sales text and different payment options, viz: recurring, non recurring, 3/6 month, 2 day trial. Look at any other site to see examples of this.
3) Don't use a default Epoch payment page - you can brand this with your own stuff. Do so. Visual disconnect like that is horrible for the user. (And make the geo thing they've started now clickable. I see paypal button, I click, nothing happens. Appalling UX.
4) Remove the 18 only and the, I assume, nicked image of the bloke with the red line through him. The top left/header is for your branding. Not some clip art.
5) Sort out the page load time, it's shocking
6) 3 or 4 sales points, not 30. No one reads them all.
7) Don't use every font you have on your PC
8) When you click to watch a trailer, let them watch the bloody trailer, don't take them to
http://www.mixedracelesbos.com/vicki-anais.html that and then not even have the Login/register clickable
9) Put some calls to action on the site. I honestly had to LOOK to find a join button.
10) In short, get a professional to design you some tours. These look like you did them yourself. If you are going for the DVTimes look, cool, if you actually want people to trust that you have a legit site, make it look like one.
HTH.
Your pal
Damian